Last week, a reader asked me a question about writing, and since I occasionally like to talk about what I do with the majority of my time (did you catch the understatement?) I answered. Her response to my response led the conversation in a slightly different direction, wherein she said that she wants someone to read the first few chapters of her work in progress, so she’ll know whether or not it’s worth finishing.
I have to admit, that statement bothered me. I’ve heard the same sentiment many times in the past few years, and it’s bothered me each time.
So here’s the thing: every story is worth finishing. Here are a couple of reasons…
First of all, there is absolutely no way that someone else will reasonably be able to tell you just from reading the first few chapters of your rough draft that the book isn’t worth finishing based on the quality of the writing or even the concept. Why not? Because it’s not done yet. The first couple of chapters of EVERYTHING I’VE EVER WRITTEN changed significantly during the second draft. Some were cut entirely. Some later became subsequent chapters after I backed the story up a bit and started earlier in the timeline.
(The third chapter of Rogue was originally the first.)
Both your writing and your concept will become smoother during the act of writing (and finishing) the book. All you need in the beginning is a good idea and a little faith in yourself. An outline doesn’t hurt, but it’s not crucial, especially if you’re still finding your own voice (the natural tone of your writing). The rewriting, revising, editing, polishing, and proofreading…all that comes later.
And honestly, if you think your work is done after the first draft, you need to sit down and reevaluate your reasons for writing. If you’re writing only for your own pleasure, fine. A rough draft is all you’ll ever need. But if you’re aiming for publication (in any of its varied forms), you should know that a completed rough draft is only the very beginning of the work.
Secondly, even if neither your story nor your concept is publishable in its current incarnation (especially if that’s the case), finishing the story is never wasted time or effort. It’s invaluable experience. It’s crucial experience, in fact.
Like most authors, I know LOTS of other writers. Lots of them. And of all the traditionally published authors I know, I can count on one hand the number of them who sold the first book they wrote. I didn’t even try to sell my first book. Or my second. They’re still buried in a seven-year-old hard drive (the modern version of the box at the back of the closet) because the writing wasn’t good enough and the concept wasn’t marketable. But if I hadn’t written those two novels (and finished them), I wouldn’t have improved enough in my craft to sell my third novel (Stray, the first one I ever sent out).
There is one thing that is true for every single writer in the world: we all need practice. That is a fact. No one is born ready for publication. Ask Steven King how many rejections he has (or read On Writing). Ask Frank L. Baum. Ask anyone. We all need practice. And we don’t just need practice writing stories—we need practice finishing them.
So, here’s my official advice to everyone out there who itches for publication but has never completed a novel:
Finish the book.
Dig deep and find that spark that interested you in your story in the first place, and feed that tiny flame until it roars to life. Write the story all the way to the end, even if it feels like it sucks, because you can fix it in the next draft. That’s the magic of the second draft—by then, you already know where the story’s going, so you can focus on polishing, rather than plotting.
So suck it up, stick it out, and make it happen. I promise you’re not wasting your time by finishing that book. You’re simply honing your skills.
P.S. Spellcheck tells me there are no errors in this post!!!
I have this issue. I must have started well over a dozen different stories and not finished one. Well, that’s not completely true. I have finished one that I worked on for over 3 years. It’s too short to actually attempt to publish (35,000 words is apparently not long enough!) and as much as I love the story, I don’t think it really has potential. I feel really bad about it but I know that just by having written it, I’ve at least finished a draft. I’m content just to show it to family/friends and that be it. I’m not so bothered about getting money out of it. I just want to show people and know whether they like it or not. But I do have a slight.. I guess you could call it ‘attention seeking’ problem with my writing. Whenever I start something new, I’m always itching for people to read it. I know that’s wrong; I should finish a draft first, but I don’t like the feeling that i’m alone when I’m writing. It’s weird, I know.
Every idea I’ve started has flamed out in the first page or two; either because I’ve not been 100% into it or just because I’ve lost the point of the story. I have got two stories that I’m in love with and am currently chugging along with slowly, and I can’t wait until they’re finished, but sometimes I get the feeling like i’m just going to halt like I did the others.
There’s nothing wrong with wanting other people to see what you’ve written. Just don’t let their opinions be the basis for whether or not you finish the story…
It sounds like you need to find a critique partner who you click with. Who will read what you’ve finished and push you to finish the next chapter until you’re done . We all need cheer leaders.
What an inspirational post. I truly enjoy your insights on writing.
Thank you.
You’ve inspired me! I have wanted to be an author since I was a child and I spend the bigger part of my time working with authors, publishers and even readers. I have stories that have haunted me for years, rolling around inside, but I’ve never really had the confidence to put them down on paper or in electronic form.
What if it’s not worth finishing?
After reading your post, I’m thinking it is…
Here’s a question for you…
I have the problem where I have stories that zoom around in my head like one of those ticket machines at arcades. The problem is that I can’t seem to get them on paper legibly. I can outline them.
I guess what I’m asking is how do you organize your thoughts so that they don’t come out one tangled mess? How do you prioritize or catalog ideas?
The truth is that there’s no easy answer. Writing is hard work, and outlining/plotting is a large part of that work. For me, it takes many hours with post it notes and a white board, jotting down every single idea I have for a story, its characters, and its worldbuilding. Then I move those ideas around (post-it notes make this easier) until they form a logical progression. Then I fill in the holes.
That’s a good idea… Maybe I’ll try that!
I have been working on my first story (outside of school) for almost a year now and have started it over at least three times but have yet to finish it. Thank you for writing this, you have truly inspired me to just finish the story and go from there
See, no one in my college creative writing classes tells us this and all of my prof’s are published. You should teach, haha. Thanks. This is really helpful, inspiring and discouraging all at once. I guess the kind of time a novel needs really weeds out the people who don’t care enough about writing, eh?
I taught high school English for a very short while, but that’s really not where I’m meant to be. Thanks, though!
Beautifully said! Now I feel like finishing my book and practicing my writing.
I love your post. Especially this line: So suck it up, stick it out, and make it happen. I’ve told that to my boys so many times. Sticking to something shows your character. Thank you.
I think even asking this question is disturbing. If you care so little for the story you question whether finishing it is ‘worth it’, then you already have your answer.
The need to finish should be so compelling you can’t question it. Worry more about why you aren’t feeling that than whether your story is any good.
It’s always worth it even as experience, just like Rachel says!
I don’t find the question disturbing. I just want new writers to have enough confidence in themselves to know that one other person’s potentially disheartening opinion isn’t reason enough to stop working on a story.
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Excellent Advice! I’m working on my second unpublished novel and the second one is so much better than the first. I’ve learned so much can’t to start the third one because the third ones the charm.
When I was a really little kid, I thought about writing, but there were, and are really, two problems. First, and maybe I’m not alone in this, school beat the desire to do much of anything academic or professional requiring regular thought out of me beyond what I have to do to get along in a job when I get one. Second, I guess I lost confidence after finding out nearly every idea I had was already written or written much better than I’d live long enough to be able to match. I know they say there are only variations on a theme anymore, but I really don’t want to duplicate if I could help it.
Great post! I think this realization might be a large part of what separates the true authors from the rest of us.
and I find the PS hilarious.
I see what you did with that PS… I had to read that post a few times before I found all the errors… and even now I think what you’ve said has stuck with me. Even the most adamant writer cannot ignore your advice after THAT exercise. Humph.